Like a willow* Come back to me

[sunniful no one]

i'll let you go, i'll set you free.

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Nickname: Cherry, to be Sunni
Other Characters: Coloredlily (accepted),. Glorypaw (pending),.
Email: can be viewed on profile.

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Name- [knottedkit knottedpaw *knottedwillow]
Age-29 moons, mature.
Gender- She-cat; Female
Clan- Branchclan
Rank- Knottedwillow is a Warrior.


Personality-Born to be bright and optimistic. As her life worn on and stresses wore her down, she began to fade and become more shadow-like, drifting to the back of camp life. The sunny, glorified girl left, hid, unsure of what next. Without the mutual support of friends Knottedwillow became more strictly focused on clan work, with nothing to do in her day. Slowly, in small respects, she earned praise such as hard-working, and a proud asset to the clan as a young warrior she spent endless days improving her skills, much less out of dedication, but to avoid being bored to death. She became a merciless warrior, her fighting skills implausible, along with her other skill taught to her by her mentor. Slowly, she started to regain her name among her clan. But instead of the ditzy, flirty girl she use to be, wandering camp, she was known as a respected warrior. With new-gained confidence, she lapsed back into a preferred feeling of relaxation, but her skills kept at ready. Unflappable, slightly naive. She is a bit careless, and slightly clumsy at other terms than her warrior duties. She can offer up a shyness upon you first happening upon her. But tends to be sweet, quirky, but kind, and firm in everything she believes in.

Appearance- sobi.org/photos/Cat/Mottle/OciCatB_004.jpg

for the masses:: alabaster, flecked with tabby girl with olive hued eyes.

No kidding, she is a beautiful smattering of white. Alabaster white, but more cream. Alabaster is more of a grayish cream, but still considered an off-white. Upon her back she bares a change that brings out her eyes. Her back is spotted with flecks of deep brown, noticeably brown, and obviously not black. These marks only extend to the base of her tail and the base nape of her neck. Her paws are all cream except her fore-left paw, which bars the same brown coating as her back. Her tail is a bit feathery, and is streaked with warm cocoa. Her complete hair length is long enough to become tangled and be a total pill to be cared for. But still short so not getting in her way. Her chest is a downy white, with rivets carved in that she cannot smooth. For the most part she is good at caring for herself, and so her pelt gleams. She also has faint tabby markings faded into her pelt.

She is a bit gawky, as a child she was small and delicate. As a newly named warrior she overcame a large growthspurt. This totally threw her off balance and took her a while before she regained her clever footing. Her shoulders aren't narrow, or wide, they match her body width, which is pretty slim. Her legs are longed and excellently carved for leaping from on branch to another. She is pretty light weight, which is good, considering you don't want any branches breaking. Her face shape is round, but her features sharp. Her face still gives off a kind gesture, but shows you should listen to her.

Her eyes are a deep olive green, but still they tend to look on the lighter side because of the way she is highly attracted to sunlight. So they take on a willowy green, this also helped in her naming title.

Tattoo- Sun;; being slightly lop-sided, a small feature nabs the mid-right section of her chest, its a small round circle with threads hanging loose, resembling the sun.

History- Re-emerged;; As a child she was bright, and happy. She was fondly known as the 'Radiant Child', and hardly ever by her actual name. Her young childhood passed by in an easy bliss, she was soon made into a young apprentice and assigned a mentor, which so happened to be a very popular, young tom. This particular tom received lots of female attention, even attention from older female apprentices. This made Knottedpaw an extremely popular apprentice because her mentor, Thickwind, loved her as a little sister. She received excellent training, but she and him had also fallen into a much deeper relation by then. In love, most girls among the camp were highly jealous of their once 'key-in'. Blissfully happy, this lasted several moons. Then Thickwind announced he wanted nothing to do with her, left the clan, wasn't heard of. Most blamed her for the loss of this great warrior or potential mate. She was a broken and shattered girl who faded into the backgrounds of the camp for six moons. Throughout that period of time she sharpened her skills, which was the only thing that kept her mind off him, and brought back memories, she knew she couldn't escape and so she faced them head on, it hurt, but she got through it. When she started to return it was like she was a new warrior all over again. Everyone wanted to know this supposed 'new girl' and Knottedwillow emerged from the shadows, almost no one remembered what was of the past, making her new start easy. She lives peacefully and joyously in her clan of the Branches. No one can slow her down ever. That is almost no one...


Role Play Example- [see Coloredlily]

i hope you find everything you've ever dreamed.

[⋆ -- fALLEN __ [s t a r]]

hey, in the first few sections (the name, age, gender, etc) could you simplify it down to one word? it would be easier on us admins if we could know that information at a glance.
also, the term "girl" refers to a young human woman, rather than the she-cat that knottedwillow is. your personality is a bit confusing as well, seeing as most of the history is contained within it and only about a sentence or two is about who she is now.
and the tattoo also seems a bit larger than what is acceptable. perhaps make it smaller?

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[sunniful no one]

the personality... Does contain a slight history in it, I noticed that before, but I think I wrote it like that because her personality is explained what it was like before, during, and after her relationship, which is all part of her personality. I'll see if I can change it some. the rest of it I'll also work on.
parts such as the name, age, gender, those I've all done long because thats what I was use too, on other sites. I'll fix those immediately.

[⋆ -- fALLEN __ [s t a r]]

there are still some "girl" phrases in there, but I'll let it pass. good job. ^^

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